It took several drafts and a lot of creative back and forth before the Dino-Riders
storyline that we've all come to know was finalized. The materials below provide
an inside look at some of the early themes and concepts that were considered.
Thanks to the generosity of Warren Bosch, the former director of research & development
at Tyco, DinoRidersWorld is able to give fans a chance to see one-of-a-kind company
production materials regarding the Dino-Riders toyline. Warren has a ton of original
material, including story development writings and unique concept sketches. These
materials were all internal development documents used by Tyco prior to the launch
of the Dino-Riders line and provide an interesting look into what Tyco was considering
doing with certain aspects of the line.
This PDF below contains several early draft of the Dino-Riders story written by Warren
Bosch. There are many interesting differences between these versions of the storyline
and the final one that everyone knows. First, you will note that the subject line
reads, “Dino-Stars” as opposed to “Dino-Riders.” Second, the Valorians are called
“Galans” (and then “Sauresians”) and the planet Valoria is called “Protorus.” The
plot of the first draft revolves around a war between the Rulons and Galans and the
attempt by “Kolus,” the chief Rulon scientist, to use an atomic bomb that has the
inadvertent effect of transporting both the Rulons and the Galans back in time to
the dinosaur age. The plot of the second draft centers around a Rulon invasion of
the planet Protorus whereby the Sauresians are forced to seek refuge on planet earth.
The plot of the third draft centers around the Rulons’ taking control over the Sauresians’
“Orbiting Environmental Control Ship” and the Sauresians’ attempt to regain control.
Early Storyline Draft
January 8, 1986
This is another one of the early drafts of the Dino-Riders storyline. This draft
has a more science-fiction theme to it, with dinosaurs living with the Sauresians
and acting as the gatekeepers of Sauresian wisdom and knowledge. The Sauresians are
led by King Purell. The Rulons are a small faction of outcasts that decide to overthrow
the Sauresian empire. The Rulons decide to poison the dinosaurs’ water supply, eventually
killing them all off with the exception of three unhatched eggs. King Purell and
the rest of the Sauresians are forced into exile in the same way that the story ultimately
played out (i.e., they fly to prehistoric earth along with a pursuing Rulon warship).
Early Storyline Draft
January 14, 1986
This is a PDF of the second draft of the Dino-Riders “Show Bible and Writers Handbook.”
This book describes in detail the background story and has in-depth character biographies.
This book was to be a guide for the writers of the cartoons. It basically describes
how the characters should interact with the dinosaurs and provides some typical scenarios
that the characters would likely find themselves in. This draft was written by Paul
Kirchner. You will notice that throughout the book, there are handwritten comments
made by Warren Bosch, in which he explains his ideas and makes constructive suggestions
on certain aspects of the storyline and character development. Here are just a few
of the many interesting things to note:
Show Bible and Writers' Handbook
January 5, 1987
This is a revised draft of the January 5, 1987 draft of the Show Bible and Writer’s
Handbook.
Show Bible and Writers' Handbook
November 27, 1987
This is the final version of the Show Bible and Writer’s Handbook and is simply called
the “Bible”.
Warren Bosch was adamant about doing away with the mental telepathy concept because
he felt it was non-sensical and not a healthy concept to expose children to. In particular,
he wanted Serena to be a doctor instead of someone with intrinsic healing powers.
The Questar character is named Magnus is this draft. The Yungstar character is named
Ace. The Llahd character is named Yungstar.
The Krulos character is named Karnaj in this draft but Warren Bosch urged that it
be changed to Krulos so that children would be able to understand it better.
The Rulon spaceship is called Slavelok instead of Dredlock.
Warren Bosch suggested the name, Space Time Energy Projector (S.T.E.P.) instead of
the Spatio-Temporal Universal Disruptor (S.T.U.D.), as listed in this draft.
This draft contemplated that dinosaurs would communicate in English through the Valorian's
AMPs. Warren Bosch insisted that the dinosaurs communicate through actions and expressions.
The Valorian dinosaurs were supposed to have unique personality traits and the Rulon
dinosaurs were supposed to be portrayed as mindless beasts with no personality.
There is a great deal of discussion on the interplay between the dinosaurs and the
Valorians on the one hand, and the dinosaurs and the Rulons on the other. The idea
here was that Valorian-controlled dinosaurs would help the Valorians by using their
natural instincts, whereas Rulon-controlled dinosaurs would simply do as commanded
and not necessarily act in their best interest.